Monday, 9 November 2015

feedback sheet


OCR Cambridge Technical Level 3 Media    Unit: 34 Web authoring and design   

Student Name:  Jai Van Der Kraan    Class: 12 x       Minimum Target Grade for task:    M        Personal Target Grade for task: D                 Provisional grade awarded:  D-

Assignment: Production of a series of vlogs analysing a film produced by Warp Films or 20th Century Fox

LO1: Understand media products and the institutions that create them 

Task interim Key Tracking Assessments
Work to complete
P
M
D
Feedback and Upgrades Required
LO1,Task 2: Textual analysis of chosen film
a) purpose
b) genre
c) form
d) style
e and f) content and meaning
g) production process












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P
·         Detailed examples used.
·         Effect on the audience is mentioned.
·         Theory is included and evaluated
I
·         Revisit, purpose, form, genre and style sections as you need specific examples from your clip.
·         For focus, you need to state if it is deep depth (all in focus) or shallow (just the foreground is in focus).
·         Do not say the camera switches in editing –say that it cuts instead.
·         Add an introduction and round up to the start and end of your script.
N
·         Complete the self- assessment below in red and post this feedback sheet to your blog.
·         Complete the improvements that are mentioned. This is due in Wednesday 11th November.
·         You must submit your LO1,Task 1 video too ASAP
Literacy/ Numeracy/Oracy
Assessment on your Unit blog.
P  A range  of key terms used
I Capital letters needed for nouns: Chuck, 20th Century Fox
Proof read your work to avoid spelling mistakes as this can sometimes compromise your analysis in places.
As mentioned last time, try not to use I as much as this is meant to be an academic essay.
Spelling: Todorov, world, conversation, hide
Avoid Americanisms: Say film instead of movie
Homophones: their instead of there, hear instead of here
N  
Complete the literacy improvements
what do I need to change to pass this task or work on for the next task? (in red)

What grade have you been awarded for this task:-D                  Have you met your MTG? YES




Self assessment change the speck on it and sort the whole slide out and change words.              I have corrected all my mistakes spellings.

















                                                                            

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